First draft

This is the first draft of our horror opening. It has many problems such as continuity and some things that are not meant to be in. For example the shouting scene at the start of the sequance. This scene does not mae sense without some of the other shots that we were going to implement but decided not to. This ,means that we should delete the footage of the shouting scene and replace the spot with something else that fits the context more. We also need to shoot at Shannons house again to get more shots to add at the end of the piece, so that we can include more titles therefore making the overall piece long, and so that the examiner notices that it was a dream.