Voice Over

This is one of the voice over scripts that we could use for our opening. The  voice over is going to be used at the start of our sequence after the production ident because this is conventional of a horror. 
 The horror genre also uses a lot of tension and a lot of pauses in between the words. this is why i have decided to use the '...'s. these are classed as pauses.  i tried to show the story line in the voice over because this is also typical of a horror film.  I used the title of the film on the voice over because it emphasizes the title later on in the opening. Shannon has also done a voice over so we will decide which one fits the film more and pick which one we will use. Improvements that should be made are i should have said where the pauses are and i should have changed my voice when i was making the voice over, however i believe it fits the genre of our piece.